Thursday, October 4, 2012

TIB Response to Second Essay



               I listened to an essay called, "Becoming a Parent is Gift". This essay told about how a man and a woman couldn't conceive a child. The neighbors brought over their kids, and they would hang up their coats and jackets, and both the man and wife would be saddened, knowing that they wouldn't be able to know what it feels like. They stopped going to the park, the movies, and anywhere where they might see children and happy pregnant people and couples. Soon they decided to adopt a child. In China, a little girl would be born and she wouldn't be wanted, or couldn't be kept, and then the husband and wife would fly to China, meet the girl, and bring her back with them.
               This essay was written very well, all of the points and sub points were easily distinguished and kept in very good chronological order. The speaker was entertaining, didn't speak in a monotone voice, and was very easy to understand and comprehend. The story tells of how some things are taken for granted, how a lot of people can have kids, and how people have kids on accident. For this man and wife however, it wasn't going to happen biologically for them because the wife was barren. They needed to have a child, it was all they wanted and dreamed of having. The little girl in the end didn't just join their family, she made them a family.

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